Unfinished Track

This is a track i've been working on for the last 30 minutes - it's only the bare bones, and stops abruptly after about a minute and a half. The plan is to have Yoshi from the band sing along with the main melody (she has an amazing voice, and it'll sound awesome - i'll provide frantic spazzy vocals in parts).

I present :
That Guy From That Movie With Wesley Snipes

The main melody (originally it was just the choppy bit) was created when I decided to place random notes all over the place - it seemed to work, and for the chorus type bit it was easy to fill the rest in.

I'm a little unsure about the settings that I used with AudioRealism Bassline (maybe to squelchy - it also needs to be a little louder.

If I fill it out a little, iron a few problems out, and if the guitars and vocals go as well as I hope with this track, this might end up on our 7".

Pins & Needles

GREETINGS, INTERNET!
Today, I come bearing a gift. An electropop gift. An electropop gift which I have made for you.

Well not really, it's a super-secret demo of a new song - sans-guitar and sans-vocals. It may end up in the pile marked 'rejected songs', but then again, it may not.

Pins & Needles

It was created soley by myself, using FL Studio 6, and an assortment of collected VST instruments. I hope that you enjoy it.

EDIT : Like a spastic, I deleted it from my server - it's re-uploaded now though :)